sT0rY iDeas

TiTLe:JuVeNiLe CriMes
PriMarY S0uRceS:OffiCer MarTiNez
DeTaiLs:I want to tell a story to cover the story of teens committing crimes and all the consequences they have to deal with. I have decided to state nothing but facts that I collected from officer Martinez and from the websites. I want all of my peers and authorities to let this story be an attention getter and show everyone all the reasons they shouldn't want to commit any crimes for any reason what so ever.
Juveniles CriMes: Are committed by many teens who are dealing with complicated lifestyles or they drop out of school or they don't have any support from the ones they love.Many teens commit these crimes, because they see their friends doing it and they want to be like their friends, or they have family members that they looked up too and they have been convicted of committing a crime so they decide to follow in their footsteps.

Quotes and Paraphrasing Exercise

1)-Quotes:I think every person living under their parents roof should contribute in all household chores no matter what the age, to show a sign of respect an cleanness. -

-Paraphrasing Quote:household chores show a great deal of respect and cleanness and if you still stay with your parents you should be cleaning.

2)"Having a Boy/Girl Friend, Is a Priority. Keeping a Spouse Is Stressful, So When You Can Learn How To Manage Yourself, First, Then I Think It Would Be okay To Have a Boy/Girl Friend."

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DeTerMiNe S.A.S

Jennifer Diaz, a counselor for the YMCA, who chaperone's all the community dances, gets a little sarcastic when she describes the kids' dancing.

"Have you ever seen 8-year old kids freak dance to Kidz Bop?" Diaz said.

For Diaz, the experience was eye-opening as to the nature of social interaction and maybe even a little more explicit than she would have liked.

JournaL EnTry 9-9-10

Paraphrase:Ice T says he started rapping in 1982.
Direct Quote:"Go to school and get an education,"Ice T said

JournaL enTry #5

During the weekend Towanna Dewitt started her weekend off doing nothing, then as it started to go on she had to wake up at 7 in the morning for the football game vs Liberty. She hung out with Alex and her auntie for her birthday, then she went to the balloon glow. Towanna was forced to wake up again at 7 for practice and had a bbq for labor day.